Precious McKenzie

WALT: edit my Precious McKenzie writing independently to identify my errors and get my work ready for Book Creator publishing

Click this link to see my Precious McKenzie book

Reflection:

I was able to do some research about Precious McKenzie and also I was able to identify and find my errors in my work without a buddy checking my work.

I found this activity exciting and hard at the same time because I had no idea who Precious McKenzie is or what Precious McKenzie was famous for. 

My Kennings Poem

WALT: distinguish between relevant and irrelevant ideas for my Kenning's Poem


Reflection:

I was able to put relevant ideas into my Kenning's poem by putting relevant  things about myself into my Kenning's Poem

Next time I could use different relevant idea's to describe myself

Quotation Marks

     My Reflection:

Walt : use a wide range of advanced punctuation correctly

I was able to identify what parts of my writing was  speaking so I know when to use quotation marks consistently.

Next time need to remember to use quotation marks all the time because sometimes I forgot to use then for all the speaking parts in my story.

Camp Merc Acrostic Poem

        Walt: edit my work independently to identify errors and get my work ready for publishing

I was able to make changes to my work and put year 6 words.

Next time I could work bye myself and correct my spelling on my own.

45 Letters Sounds

Walt : identify different letter sounds

10 Things You need to Know about Me

Walt : use advanced punctuation

We have learning how to use bullet points correctly in my 10 Things About Me slideshow.  I learnt you need to :

• Place the bullet point in the margin.
• Use a capital letter after the bullet point.
• If you have written a sentence, end it with a punctuation eg. fullstop.
• Bullet points are used to create lists.
• Find the bullet points icon on the right hand side at top of the tool bar called bullet lists.
• You need to be in a text box to get bullet points

Next time I will try and use bullet points in more of writing.

Can you guess which of my information is true and which is a lie ?

Welcome Post

My Reflection:

This year I'm feeling I'm really excited and nervous a bit.   I am looking forward to camp and meet new people.  I am also looking forward to etc and to do my jobs.  I am excited because I get to experience new things

One of my goals are.....

• to be a awesome roll model 
• to get 100 gold ticks
• follow the school rules
• to be a digikid

Halloween Fright

Term 4 expectations

This activity is about expectations

I thought it was easy because I had a partner to talk to , then the groups got bigger then we had a bigger group to talk what we were talking about.

Next I could think about my own idea's

Spinner Investigating

A-Z Olympics peom

This activity was about writing sentences but it had to be about the Olympics.
I thought this was hard because I had to find out some that match to the Olympics.
Next time I could find some rhymes on google.

Persuasive Argument

Similes

I am learning to do similes. They help me to make my writing easier and more interesting.

Recount Writing

Planning My Writing

I was learning to plan my writing using a brainstorm. The tricky part was nothing. I can think of lots of things. The easy part was when I write my brainstorm. Next in writing I would like to learn spelling.